Thursday, 23 November 2017

Script

Scene 1
Phoenix: Cries “Get away from me!”


Scene 2


Skye: Hey guys this is Raven, she’s new
Raven: Hey,
Skye: Hey we are hanging out later, do you want to join us
Raven: Sure


Scene 3:

*All laughing*
Skye: So Raven where do you come from
Raven: i dont know, its none of your business


Scene 5:

Phoenix: I thinks theres something wrong with Raven
Skye :Oh it’s nothing, she probably just doesn’t want to talk about her personal life, that’s all… (being naive)
Phoenix: Hmm...I don't know...I have a strong feeling about this

Scene 7:
Raven: Dont think i dont know what you are up to, leave me alone or there will be consequences


Scene 8:
Phoenix: What the hell


Scene 9:
Phoenix: She said she will hurt us if we don’t leave her alone
Skye: Oh my god I can’t believe it. You were right, there is something wrong with her


Scene 11:
*Voiceover*
Phoenix: She hurt Skye


Scene 12:
Eli: What are you doing in here, leave me alone


Scene 13:
*Voiceover*
Raven: I warned you, it is your fault for what happens next.

Group Narrative

Our group narrative consists of three best friends, Phoenix, Skye and Eli. They go to school together and have joyous moments, as they're very close. Then, a new girl is introduced by Skye, called Raven, and is quick to befriend her as well as invite her into the group.

The four of them get to know each other and ask about Raven's background and where she has come from however, doesn't respond clearly or diverts the questions. In doing so, Phoenix becomes suspicious of this and continuously questions about her to the others. In addition, Phoenix comes across Raven acting unusual when she is alone. However, the others don't see it as a concern which results in Phoenix wanting to investigate this further and prove them wrong. Phoenix follows her home to find out she lives in an abandoned house which builds tension and problems between the two as Raven finds out and threatens her to back off. This terrifies and worries Phoenix therefore tells Skye that Raven has threatened her and that they should all be careful.

Investigating into Raven, Phoenix searches her up and finds news articles of her missing from a mental hospital that she has escaped from, now understanding her secret and why she is so protective of it. As Raven knows Phoenix is onto her she starts to cause trouble such as pushing Skye down the stairs and locking Eli into a small room, trying to kill them both. Raven sends another threat to Phoenix via social media saying 'I warned you...' Phoenix is the only one who really knows what's wrong with Raven at this point and therefore decided to attack her in Phoenix's house in order to not get exposed.

Phoenix struggles to get hold of her however does, knocking her unconscious, and immediately calls the police. Raven is taken away for good and the three best friends take back their lives and go on as normal.